Writing; a letter

Hi Tina,

It was great to get yout letter! I'm very happy because in the letter you told me that the summer was great. The truth is that I have decided to write you before I recived your letter because I wanted to tell you all my holidays.

This summer I went to Mallorca with two of my friends. We were in a basketball camp to improve our infividual technique. We met a lot of people and we met one of the best players in Spain. When I saw him I couldn't believe it, my dream made real. When the basketball camp finishied, we came back, and two weeks later I went to London for forty days. I lived with a family, and I had to look after the children of. The parents were very friendly and the children too, but the twins were quite naughty. During the forty days I did a lot of things. I visited the most important places in London, and I met lots of English teenagers. One day we went to Camden Market, it is a very important market. I loved it, there are lots of shops and it is very bid, you can find whatever you like. The las day in London was very sad, because the children didn't want me to leave the house, but I promised them that in Christmas holidays I would visit them.

Well, I supose that you have started the school year, I hopee that your marks are great and I hope to see you soon.

I can't wait to hear from you!

Yours,
Gina.